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Hahaha not bad. The animation is very clean at some parts but pretty choppy at others. I would add more inbetweens. Also use more than one frame for the fighting cloud man it wouldn't be that much more effort. The consistency of the quality takes a huge dip when you have a static image of a cloud just spinning around casually.

Could be better. The framing is pretty good and the movement is pretty good although very linear. Even if you kept the animation simple, though, this would be a lot stronger if you put some time into the art.

Make the ships, explosions and terrain look nice. Since you're not redrawing anything for the animation it wouldn't be too much more work than you're already putting in with a huge step up in quality as the payoff. That's my advice.

mashitandsmashit responds:

Understood. I guess I could always remaster it in the future. I actually made this in a bit of a hurry, but I'm sure I can make future works look better.

Looks fantastic. Should be longer.

Very strange. I'm confused haha. The character animation was charming and I liked the main character. The background art was a little bit too inconsistent.

Craziest animation ive ever seen

instaclassic

Great job! It was well written and executed. Art and animation were strong/consistent within the style. The only thing I didn't like was the main character's character design. I don't like the black eyes/sunglasses design. I think it overcomplicates her face but taht's just my 2 cents.

Pretty good man. You have a knack for doing as little animating as possible to tell the story haha i kid i kid. But yeah I would consider adding more work into the actual animating. The art and the framing looks good for the most part as does the storyboarding. but the issue is it feels more like an animatic (moving storyboard) than an animation.

I am an animator, artist and voice actor and I usually animate the first thing that comes to my head. I have a weird head...

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