I think this is my favorite short of yours.
I think this is my favorite short of yours.
This is really well done I just wish there was more to it. Interested to see more of your work.
Haha the art is great but the joke didn't land that well for me. Best of luck! You definitely have talent.
Thank you very much! I'm trying to work on comedy the best I can as well as art/animation. Trying to get one joke out may not work like I originally visioned or it may not just click for some people. (Well, you still typed Haha, so I guess you at least found it humorous. XD) This joke was meant to be simple but the time it took to make the whole animation takes forever. I'm trying harder to make sure the jokes land as making sure the joke is worth from now on.
hahahaha pretty funny. i'd make sure to use a pop filter next time you record though there was a "p" sound mid way through that almost broke my speakers lol. Also, is there a reason batman's mouth is a different color from everything else?
The animation was decent but the humor ultimately carried it.
great art and animation! I wish there was a little more meat but I under stand this is just part one and it's a good set up.
At it's best these are really impressive at their worst they are very average. Why did you start with a mouse crawl and a generic walk cycle? You should have your most impressive shots first. The goblin, the wizard, and pencil were probably the smoothest animation.
Is my first showreel. When preparing the composition did not think that the order of the clips was important, I did more based on the content and the duration of these, but I will keep in mind.
Thank you very much for your comment!
cool animation and art style! some of the effects looked a little sloppy but it didn't detract from the piece as a whole.
LOOOOOOOOOL this is some quality garbage animation and I mean that in the best way possible. My only suggestion would be to have cut it down by about 30 seconds, get to the point (or lack thereof lol) quicker.
Awesome work! The style of key frame pose animation works really well with the fighting. You really know how to create believable motion in a few frames.
My only suggestion would be a frame or two of gentle ease for less extreme actions like moving their arm to another position. It looks choppy at that point because the motion is a lot slower.
Great work
Thanks for the feedback. I'll make the adjustments . Hope I have enough time though. Thanks a lot.
Really cool! I would have had the pacing pick up at around the second row, it started to feel too slow after you caught on the concept.
Good job!
yeah! you are certainly right! packing every cycle correcly was hard haha.
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