Art style 5/5
Animation 4/5
Voice acting 4/5
Story 3/5
It looks absolutely beautiful I just wish there was a little more to the plot. Your style is impeccable though!
Art style 5/5
Animation 4/5
Voice acting 4/5
Story 3/5
It looks absolutely beautiful I just wish there was a little more to the plot. Your style is impeccable though!
Thanks!!
This is the BEST one so far! The writing is the most clever and well written. The jokes are more creative and nuanced. It's longer. Had some extra dope visuals! Gotta love it! Why did their outlines randomly change color at the end tho?
That was just a weird experiment. I thought it might be a fun way to visualize their excitement by having them 'glow' a little, like they're so excited their colours can't be contained by the black outlines. Maybe it wasn't a good idea, I dunno!
Not terrible but needs more in betweens and better audio quality
This was my very first animation I created. I did the recording and animation on my phone, so it was harder, but I'll take your advise. :3
The drawings look nice but a little more effort on the animation would make a big difference. Some in betweens and better timing would help. Little touches like having the water ripple instead being a flat image and having the tongue line up with the teeth as it moves would help. Yes that means you have to redraw more frames but it's worth it. Overall it's a fun concept but it didn't do much for me entertainment-wise. The best qualities of this are that the drawings themselves look pretty solid.
Word, appreciate the feedback. Just startin out in animation so it’s helpful to get these criticisms/tips from other animators. I checked out ur YT channel and dig the style, very fluid. I think the more experience I get the better/smoother the vids will get.
the animation is good while they're jumping across the screen but there are awkward frames taht are out of place that make it look choppy
Fair thoughts. Thanks. :)
That was pretty clever. The art and animation needs improvement but it was good enough for the sake of telling the story/joke. nice work
Thanks man. Yeah I’m just starting out and learning new techniques with each video I make, slowly improving. I appreciate the feedback
Aye I saw this on IG! Hilarious!
awesome! just noticed i follow you there
Damn he really ate a rat with his dick. That's skills.
Lmao I guess thats what happens when you are hungry enough!
dope!
<3
my man
MrSeaks strikes again
Hahah you're the man
I am an animator, artist and voice actor and I usually animate the first thing that comes to my head. I have a weird head...
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Los Angeles, CA
Joined on 5/12/13