StephenHutchins's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Haunting History]

MrSeaks strikes again

MrSeaks responds:

Hahah you're the man

[Real life Dark Souls]

Your art style looks so good!

VolFMaple responds:

Thank you!

[SCARIEST EXPERIENCE OF MY LIFE! (3/3)]

three stars because you're good at storytelling and it kept my attention but otherwise it would've gotten 1.5/5

It's okay to not have super fancy art or animation but at least put some effort into the quality of the drawings. Little things like cleaning up the lines and keeping them the same weight, choosing a stronger color pallet and adding even one or two more in betweens to the animations could really transform the overall package.

You have a talent for youtube style storytelling so keep it up i'd just put more effort into the overall presentation.

MineJERMO responds:

yeah, I also realized I need to clean the animations but I wanted to finish the video first and I'll clean out everything on my other videos. I'll see what colors and can put in to really bring it out. I have a bad habit of not keeping drawings proportional but that's simply because I don't know how to lol. And Also.... I TOTALLY FORGOT TO DO ALL THE IN BETWEENS XD. I ACTUALLY FEEL LIKE AN IDIOT XD. but thanks a lot anyway for the review. It really means a lot that I can get a constructive examination of my videos. That's why I made a Newgrounds account in the first place lol.

[TheLostWorld of Wally(snippet) "you aint got the answers"]

hahaha nice job. did you use the after effects puppet tool for the arms?

tredaycartoons responds:

thanks man no i used a program called moho 12 is vector based and frame by frame program

[Toons To Wear Pants To]

Your style is super dope and you push the randomness to bounds i had yet to see.

AcidX responds:

Thank you for noticing me senpai

[Reddit/9gag tell a joke]

Masterpiece. Crazy how memes ending up going so much farther than we could have imagined when this was released.

HanoiSugoi responds:

Hahaha thank you for commenting! Just saw it now about a month after you posted it. but whatever. Yeah memes have now become real life.

[Beerus vs Gorath Sneak Peak]

The art is looking nice but there are just some issues with the aesthetic. the image quality is really inconsistent, being sharp in some places, pixelated in some, and blurry in others.

Plus you have the quality mixed up in multiple places in the same frame such as the shot with the globe spinning where the background creature is blurry but the purple guy is pixely and the earth is sharp.

also I would consider different text for the subtitles.

Just some things to think about.

BigroomBlitz responds:

Didn't saw them before hand, thank you so much! going to try to fix them without compromising the movie itself :) lol stay tuned for the whole thing

[Chase Through Space]

Could be better. The framing is pretty good and the movement is pretty good although very linear. Even if you kept the animation simple, though, this would be a lot stronger if you put some time into the art.

Make the ships, explosions and terrain look nice. Since you're not redrawing anything for the animation it wouldn't be too much more work than you're already putting in with a huge step up in quality as the payoff. That's my advice.

mashitandsmashit responds:

Understood. I guess I could always remaster it in the future. I actually made this in a bit of a hurry, but I'm sure I can make future works look better.

[PANDEMON!UM - Episode One - Erotic Audio Books, With Annette]

The art is pretty good but you need to clean up your animation a lot. Also your audio sounds like it was recorded on a potato in someone's uterus. It made it really hard to follow what was happening. Keep it up!

RyzoJ89 responds:

The audio was completely improvised, man. To clean up the audio, or re-do would have taken away from the authenticity of it, which is what i believe makes it funny.
And yeah, I have a long way to go with the animation, but for my first try, im pretty proud :)
thanks for the feedback though dude :)

[Dancing tape recorder]

Cool man! A well thought out and executed loop. I wish there was more to it tho

very-mary-land responds:

Thanks!