StephenHutchins's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Real life Dark Souls]

Your art style looks so good!

VolFMaple responds:

Thank you!

[SCARIEST EXPERIENCE OF MY LIFE! (3/3)]

three stars because you're good at storytelling and it kept my attention but otherwise it would've gotten 1.5/5

It's okay to not have super fancy art or animation but at least put some effort into the quality of the drawings. Little things like cleaning up the lines and keeping them the same weight, choosing a stronger color pallet and adding even one or two more in betweens to the animations could really transform the overall package.

You have a talent for youtube style storytelling so keep it up i'd just put more effort into the overall presentation.

MineJERMO responds:

yeah, I also realized I need to clean the animations but I wanted to finish the video first and I'll clean out everything on my other videos. I'll see what colors and can put in to really bring it out. I have a bad habit of not keeping drawings proportional but that's simply because I don't know how to lol. And Also.... I TOTALLY FORGOT TO DO ALL THE IN BETWEENS XD. I ACTUALLY FEEL LIKE AN IDIOT XD. but thanks a lot anyway for the review. It really means a lot that I can get a constructive examination of my videos. That's why I made a Newgrounds account in the first place lol.

[TheLostWorld of Wally(snippet) "you aint got the answers"]

hahaha nice job. did you use the after effects puppet tool for the arms?

tredaycartoons responds:

thanks man no i used a program called moho 12 is vector based and frame by frame program

[Toons To Wear Pants To]

Your style is super dope and you push the randomness to bounds i had yet to see.

AcidX responds:

Thank you for noticing me senpai

[Reddit/9gag tell a joke]

Masterpiece. Crazy how memes ending up going so much farther than we could have imagined when this was released.

HanoiSugoi responds:

Hahaha thank you for commenting! Just saw it now about a month after you posted it. but whatever. Yeah memes have now become real life.

[Chase Through Space]

Could be better. The framing is pretty good and the movement is pretty good although very linear. Even if you kept the animation simple, though, this would be a lot stronger if you put some time into the art.

Make the ships, explosions and terrain look nice. Since you're not redrawing anything for the animation it wouldn't be too much more work than you're already putting in with a huge step up in quality as the payoff. That's my advice.

mashitandsmashit responds:

Understood. I guess I could always remaster it in the future. I actually made this in a bit of a hurry, but I'm sure I can make future works look better.

[PANDEMON!UM - Episode One - Erotic Audio Books, With Annette]

The art is pretty good but you need to clean up your animation a lot. Also your audio sounds like it was recorded on a potato in someone's uterus. It made it really hard to follow what was happening. Keep it up!

RyzoJ89 responds:

The audio was completely improvised, man. To clean up the audio, or re-do would have taken away from the authenticity of it, which is what i believe makes it funny.
And yeah, I have a long way to go with the animation, but for my first try, im pretty proud :)
thanks for the feedback though dude :)

[Dancing tape recorder]

Cool man! A well thought out and executed loop. I wish there was more to it tho

very-mary-land responds:

Thanks!

[Bugged Out]

great job man! your 3d sense is really strong and your storytelling is great! the animation could be timed/composed better at parts but for the most part it's really well done!

some things I noticed were when the spider first waved the motion of the wave was evenly timed where as it should probably be darting back and forth with eases on the ends of the arc. also, when the vase was tilting both in the horizontal and the circular motions it wasn't fully believable. when it rocked horizontally it seemed to bend instead of tilt back and forth and while the circular motion was drawn well it was titled a little too far outwards.

hope that helps!

TallBird responds:

Thanks man! I keep those details in mind for next time!