StephenHutchins's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[YOU & ME - Episode #01]

Just watched your other cartoon, this one is a bit funnier but hearing this one as well I think you could use a better female voice actor. Just tryna help I hope the advice isn't annoying lol.

CreativeFosse responds:

Thanks for your feedback, StephenHutchins.

The female voice actor did deliver different variations of voices that she does, but in my head the voice that is used for the female character really fit the personality of the character.
So the female voice actor (or actress) is not to blame for this "bad" voice as the choice of using her voice in this way is totally mine.

I appreciate your opinion and your feedback on your point of view (I really do) but in my head the voice works well with the female character (there will be more intence voice acting in future episodes that hopefully will release the unknown levels of what this voice is capable of).

Anyway, thanks again for your feeback. It really matters to me.

Enjoy your day.

[YOU & ME - Episode #02]

The art style is dope but the joke is not nearly funny enough to carry the cartoon. It's only a couple seconds long and the whole thing is riding on that joke being funny and it's not that good.

Not trying to be mean, your character and background design is good you just need better writing.

CreativeFosse responds:

Hi, StephenHutchins.

Thank you for your feedback. It helps me to see things in a different way than before.
I agree that the animation might be too short and because of that it don't slam the punchline well enough.
But this animation is based on a comic strip with 3-4 panels and what I've tried to do is to make those panels come alive through animation without too much changes and work. I was trying to maintain the the same progression in the animation as in the comic strip. Maybe it doesn't work as well as I hoped for and I'll really appreciate it if others too would like to comment on this. I will however keep this in mind for future episodes and experiment with it a little more.

Thanks again for your feeback.

Enjoy your day.

[Worst Gym Ever]

Your art style is on point but the story is way too long and not that engaging or funny.

I understand what you're trying to do with the minimalistic animation/animatic to go along with a story but you need to have more diversity in your choice of frames and composition.

50% of the shots are the exact same shot of a blonde guy not even moving on the right side of the screen.

Anyway, it has potential and your art style is aesthetically pleasing for the most part so just keep working at it.

satkatanimations responds:

Thank you for the feedback :). I will definitely work on it.

[Game Of Thrones New Intro]

I'm not tryna be a hater but your best work is the work that's more developed and has a story/concept behind it. These 5 second videos you keep submitting just don't do anything for me. I still support your work though.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

Pure respect!! <3 And I agree, I do have a new web series with character development and the works! I'll msg u when it's ready :)

Im just pumping out these mini's in the meantime to stay relevant and updated :D

[You Don't Seem to Understand]

The drawings were okay, but the animation was so minimalistic it served almost no purpose. Plus it's a remake of an animation that is already boring to begin with. The music is great though.

You definitely have potential tho keep working at it

[Trump Loves Doggy Style]

hahahaha great work man!