StephenHutchins's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PUNCH MAIL!!]

Hahahaha Not bad man. The art looks nice but you need to brush up on the timing in the animation. For example, his head nods at the same rate that his legs do and they should be offset. I would also add more in betweens in the arm movements.

[Batman gets Butt Hurt]

Haha nice job man. The art is great and the writing is pretty funny. I would make the body movements a bit more dynamic though.

The voice acting is great but the audio quality is really bad. There are a lot of plosives and it sounds like it was recorded on a laptop mic.

[Wumboman Vs. Purp3L]

Good job man! The animation and camera movements look great! as do the faces.

I would consider cleaning up your background art to match better though. Also, the scribbled lines you use for the blurs don't really sell the movement. I would consider using thicker stretched shapes or lines for the blur rather than thin scratchy ones.

[PANDEMON!UM - Episode One - Erotic Audio Books, With Annette]

The art is pretty good but you need to clean up your animation a lot. Also your audio sounds like it was recorded on a potato in someone's uterus. It made it really hard to follow what was happening. Keep it up!

RyzoJ89 responds:

The audio was completely improvised, man. To clean up the audio, or re-do would have taken away from the authenticity of it, which is what i believe makes it funny.
And yeah, I have a long way to go with the animation, but for my first try, im pretty proud :)
thanks for the feedback though dude :)

[Boruto Opening - OMEGA EDITION]

HAHAHA had me dying from the beginning. The art and animation are really well done with a few inconsistencies I can only assume were due to the large volume of detailed shots you had to pump out to make this work.

My only suggestion would be go back and look at the timing for some of the shots. For most of them the really quick pace fits the humor but there are a couple moments such as at 0:18 where looks a little sloppy.

[Dancing tape recorder]

Cool man! A well thought out and executed loop. I wish there was more to it tho

very-mary-land responds:

Thanks!

[Spongebob at 2am]

Hahaha pretty funny man. The art is dope but i'd work on smoothing out the animation a bit. The voice acting was pretty good too.

[L.A. Dicks: Tofu Trouble]

Hahahahaha great job.

[Bugged Out]

great job man! your 3d sense is really strong and your storytelling is great! the animation could be timed/composed better at parts but for the most part it's really well done!

some things I noticed were when the spider first waved the motion of the wave was evenly timed where as it should probably be darting back and forth with eases on the ends of the arc. also, when the vase was tilting both in the horizontal and the circular motions it wasn't fully believable. when it rocked horizontally it seemed to bend instead of tilt back and forth and while the circular motion was drawn well it was titled a little too far outwards.

hope that helps!

TallBird responds:

Thanks man! I keep those details in mind for next time!

[Bouncing Buddy]

Really dope test but not really a full animation.